Negotiated Specialist Project - Production OutcomesThe Essence of ALL FM
The Essence of ALL FM is two short films created to be used as part of a fundraising campaign for the station. The first film focuses on how the diversity of South Manchester is reflected in the people who work at ALL FM, while the second looks at wellbeing and the training offered by ALL FM.
The Essence of ALL FM: Diversity
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Video Description and Tags
Title: The Essence of ALL FM: Diversity
Description:
ALL FM is a wonderful community radio station based in South Manchester.
The community here is very diverse. ALL FM broadcasts live radio 16 hours a day, 7 days a week serving the whole community.
Listen and support ALL FM at allfm.org
Team ALL FM are running in the Great Manchester Run raising money for ALL FM.
Support them by visiting wonderful.org/fundraiser/thegreatrun-59518be9
Video filmed and edited by Brin Coleman for Moon & Bacon productions
brincoleman.co.uk
Music: 'Blocker' by Blocker
blocker.bandcamp.com/album/blocker-ep
Categories: Documentary, Reporting & Journalism, People (Vimeo), People & Blogs (YouTube).
Tags: community, radio, Manchester, charity, fundraising, diversity
The Essence of ALL FM: Community and Wellbeing
View this film on Vimeo | YouTube
Video Description and Tags
Title: The Essence of ALL FM: Community and Wellbeing
Description:
ALL FM is a wonderful community radio station based in South Manchester.
The community here is very diverse. ALL FM broadcasts live radio 16 hours a day, 7 days a week serving the whole community.
Listen and support ALL FM at allfm.org
Team ALL FM are running in the Great Manchester Run raising money for ALL FM.
Support them by visiting wonderful.org/fundraiser/thegreatrun-59518be9
Video filmed and edited by Brin Coleman for Moon & Bacon productions
brincoleman.co.uk
Music: 'Blocker' by Blocker
blocker.bandcamp.com/album/blocker-ep
Categories: Documentary, Reporting & Journalism, People (Vimeo), People & Blogs (YouTube).
Tags: community, radio, Manchester, charity, fundraising, diversity, wellbeing
Client Feedback
I think both are meet the brief with aplomb.
Film 1 [Diversity] – under 50 seconds. Visuals & interview highlight the diversity & essence of ALL FM.
The one change I’d like is:
'ALL FM is probably one of the most diverse radio stations in Manchester and for that reason alone deserves to be here.'
Del’s final line – I know what he means but it lacks dynamism ‘deserves to be here’.
With a little editing and cutaway could it simply be?
'ALL FM is probably one of the most diverse radio stations in Manchester and for that reason alone deserves to be here'.
Film 2 [Community & Wellbeing]: again delivers in visuals & interviews. Maybe slightly more to the point. ie give us your money.
Think you’ve done a sterling job on both films…
Ed Connole, Station Manager, ALL FM
Note: After this feedback, I implemented the suggested edits into the finished film above.